tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1092542319367811395.post5197798732933385504..comments2012-01-09T08:00:31.273-08:00Milo James Fowlerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12461324700935948129noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1092542319367811395.post-5438203890121629762012-01-09T08:00:31.273-08:002012-01-09T08:00:31.273-08:00

Lydia: Thanks for reading.<br /><br />Deborah: Me too.

Milo James Fowlerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12461324700935948129noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1092542319367811395.post-64275639897519909202012-01-08T13:12:41.452-08:002012-01-08T13:12:41.452-08:00

Oh, yes. I forgot about the good ones. I love them!

Deborah Walkerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10120928766455872439noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1092542319367811395.post-73966058463015542942012-01-08T01:40:30.670-08:002012-01-08T01:40:30.670-08:00

Congratulations, Milo.<br /><br />It was a fun read.

Lydia Grayhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12156550742845287244noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1092542319367811395.post-86998958155992603992012-01-07T19:57:02.458-08:002012-01-07T19:57:02.458-08:00

Madeleine: W1S1 weekly was a real challenge last year, but I made it; even so, I&#39;m going for monthly this year, too. 4 subs already? Way to go!<br /><br />Dafeenah: You are most welcome.

Milo James Fowlerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12461324700935948129noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1092542319367811395.post-49967968020193627992012-01-07T16:02:54.851-08:002012-01-07T16:02:54.851-08:00

Congrats! I&#39;ll have to check it out. Thanks for all of the helpful info too!

Dafeenahhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03078199274088729529noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1092542319367811395.post-72489151990734201362012-01-07T08:36:02.161-08:002012-01-07T08:36:02.161-08:00

Congrats Milo. I will have to return to this when I can give it my full attention.<br /><br />As for Write1sub1. I may have to choose the monthly one as last year&#39;s attempt at weekly sent my stress levels overboard LOL! Having said that so far I have submitted to 4 things this month already. Yay!

Madeleine Maddockshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12849218685963695062noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1092542319367811395.post-12736899892258449952012-01-07T05:42:37.887-08:002012-01-07T05:42:37.887-08:00

Deborah + Simon: Thanks for reading!<br /><br />Deborah: Not even the good ones? =]

Milo James Fowlerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12461324700935948129noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1092542319367811395.post-40083344086271505582012-01-07T03:49:43.876-08:002012-01-07T03:49:43.876-08:00

Lovely little story, Milo: a really strong sense of place.

Simon Kewinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11537163555998763769noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1092542319367811395.post-50214742516856915812012-01-06T20:02:35.390-08:002012-01-06T20:02:35.390-08:00

I don&#39;t like getting reader comments. There, ! I&#39;ve said it!<br /><br />Good story, Milo. Great characters.

Deborah Walkerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10120928766455872439noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1092542319367811395.post-42078483470437840892012-01-06T17:16:33.929-08:002012-01-06T17:16:33.929-08:00

Michael: Thanks for reading! I guess it could be fleshed out into a longer story, but this scene was more about Lawrence&#39;s reaction to the incomprehensible than anything else.<br /><br />Michael: Thank you sir, and Happy 2012 to you as well!<br /><br />Eagle: Mos def. =]<br /><br />Chuck: Thanks, man. And of the <i>Transformer</i> films, that one was pretty good!

Milo James Fowlerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12461324700935948129noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1092542319367811395.post-39157783727906261492012-01-06T16:42:56.234-08:002012-01-06T16:42:56.234-08:00

Well done. I like your stuff. And after watching Transformers Dark Of The moon last night, anything is possible!

Chuckhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13676928110297819368noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1092542319367811395.post-5708586380968347682012-01-06T16:32:46.810-08:002012-01-06T16:32:46.810-08:00

Congratulations! :) Good way to start off the year.

The Golden Eaglehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08721520451194318436noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1092542319367811395.post-21938580617378226962012-01-06T13:40:40.884-08:002012-01-06T13:40:40.884-08:00

Hey, Milo,<br /><br />Happy New Year... Congrats on the great beginning to 2012.<br /><br />I am not familiar with EDF, so I am looking forward to checking your story and them out.<br /><br />Your blog is always a great source for writers...

Michael Di Gesuhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17047267262428143113noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1092542319367811395.post-31323803997112236592012-01-06T13:13:00.147-08:002012-01-06T13:13:00.147-08:00

I read it. I love your story but I would like to know more. It really seems unfinished to me which is kind of frustrating for a reader.

Michael Offutt, Visitor from the Futurehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10557969104886174930noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1092542319367811395.post-27619637975181283572012-01-06T11:06:02.270-08:002012-01-06T11:06:02.270-08:00

Madeline: I don&#39;t know why I&#39;ve waited so long to send them something new; I&#39;ve got to remedy that.<br /><br />Alex: Thanks, man.<br /><br />Shane: Thank you, sir!<br /><br />Steve: Always good to consider the source, but as a rule I find the reader feedback to be helpful.<br /><br />Martin: I&#39;m on the monthly challege also this year -- &quot;Stone in the Sky&quot; was from 2011&

Milo James Fowlerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12461324700935948129noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1092542319367811395.post-49876959940301082062012-01-06T08:19:30.341-08:002012-01-06T08:19:30.341-08:00

One published already! I&#39;ve only just had the idea for my first story of W1S1...the monthly version.

Martin Willoughbyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05605554706836638988noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1092542319367811395.post-60689888540559832112012-01-06T07:55:17.970-08:002012-01-06T07:55:17.970-08:00

Congratulations, Milo. Very inventive piece. I&#39;m a big fan of the EDF team too. They always offer something worthwhile in their decision letters. Reader comments can get a bit brutal at times, but that&#39;s a good way to thicken the skin :-)

Steve Rameyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10643925402494246940noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1092542319367811395.post-60113689140765802962012-01-06T07:15:31.493-08:002012-01-06T07:15:31.493-08:00

Congrats, Milo. Left a comment over there last night. I, too, agree on the EDF first-reader feedback being great.

shanemgavinhttp://shanemgavin.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1092542319367811395.post-56081638442028453462012-01-06T06:36:28.814-08:002012-01-06T06:36:28.814-08:00

Congratulations, Milo! And you know I wouldn&#39;t say anything bad.

Alex J. Cavanaughhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09770065693345181702noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1092542319367811395.post-28044236257077440052012-01-06T06:13:18.331-08:002012-01-06T06:13:18.331-08:00

Congrats, Milo! Way to start 2012. :)<br /><br />And I agree about the EDF editorial feedback.

Madeline Mora-Summontehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05529397293165046430noreply@blogger.com