tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1092542319367811395.post4281516204312035480..comments2012-01-17T11:23:54.752-08:00Milo James Fowlerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12461324700935948129noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1092542319367811395.post-21697273900088376022012-01-17T11:23:54.752-08:002012-01-17T11:23:54.752-08:00

A rarity in the old days, I presume.

Milo James Fowlerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12461324700935948129noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1092542319367811395.post-26215473097634622752012-01-17T04:29:21.387-08:002012-01-17T04:29:21.387-08:00

The 'pearly whites' brought a smile to my face.

Martin Willoughbyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05605554706836638988noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1092542319367811395.post-69496762431936791822012-01-16T06:26:51.687-08:002012-01-16T06:26:51.687-08:00

Simon + Madeline: Glad you enjoyed it; thanks for reading!

Milo James Fowlerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12461324700935948129noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1092542319367811395.post-63218518131986194192012-01-16T06:17:23.828-08:002012-01-16T06:17:23.828-08:00

Milo, I love that first sentence, first paragraph. It put me right into the story in such a smooth way. Well done.

Madeline Mora-Summontehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05529397293165046430noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1092542319367811395.post-9813090051898342402012-01-16T04:36:44.917-08:002012-01-16T04:36:44.917-08:00

Milo - great stuff. Really enjoyed that. Lots of vivid detail.

Simon Kewinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11537163555998763769noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1092542319367811395.post-36244669638036327832012-01-15T13:45:20.789-08:002012-01-15T13:45:20.789-08:00

Tony: Thank you, sir. They have good company in the <i>Arcane</i> anthology -- I enjoyed your story very much.<br /><br />Deborah: First <i>Scifaikuest</i>, and now this one. Thanks for pointing me in the right direction; I&#39;ll have to get something out to them posthaste!<br /><br />Lisa: It&#39;s a little disconcerting, don&#39;t you think?<br /><br />Michael: Taking out my own teeth

Milo James Fowlerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12461324700935948129noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1092542319367811395.post-67577076702053889062012-01-15T10:41:22.957-08:002012-01-15T10:41:22.957-08:00

I like the dialogue. You write it well accounting for the dialect and mispronunciations one would make without teeth.

Michael Offutt, Evolved Monkeyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10557969104886174930noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1092542319367811395.post-63650883786847475852012-01-15T10:25:24.495-08:002012-01-15T10:25:24.495-08:00

Gosh, I hate it when people won&#39;t keep their teeth in :-) Well done Milo!

Lihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08831231531918915804noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1092542319367811395.post-81429212717991711432012-01-15T09:29:03.256-08:002012-01-15T09:29:03.256-08:00

Excellent. I wonder if you&#39;ve made a sub here, Milo. <br /><br /><a href="http://michaelknost.blogspot.com/2011/11/new-anthology-guidelines-dark-trails.html" rel="nofollow">Dark Trails</a><br /><br />I haven&#39;t-- not yet.

Deborah Walkerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10120928766455872439noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1092542319367811395.post-69945524428807623062012-01-15T09:08:11.921-08:002012-01-15T09:08:11.921-08:00

Sweet! I can already tell I&#39;m really going to like Coyote Cal and Big Yap. :-) Congrats on the release.

AnthonyJRapinohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11581208296144295224noreply@blogger.com