reality

No word yet on when "Tomorrow's Dawn" will appear at Daily Science Fiction, but I did sign my contract and compose a short bio. They also gave me the opportunity to share a little about how I came up with the story. The following comments will appear beneath "Tomorrow's Dawn" once it's published:

I enjoy serving jury duty as much as the next guy. Last summer, during a lunch break from the courthouse, I took the trolley to one of my favorite taco shops. On the way, three men came aboard and seated themselves around me, speaking in Arabic and drawing wary glances from fellow passengers who whispered among themselves. The men were oblivious, both to me and their surroundings, talking in excited tones and showing each other pens, staplers, T-shirts, and canvas bags, all emblazoned with the same company logo. Each man wore a name tag with the logo on it and JORDAN underneath. My guess: they were in town for a business convention.

The way I saw it, I had two options: maintain the invisible wall between us until my stop, or do something to bridge the gap. I chose the latter. And I'll never forget those five minutes that started out tense and awkward—as if I had somehow invaded their self-imposed protective bubble—and ended with laughter, one of them trying to staple my jury pamphlet, and another one offering me a piece of their loot (a pen).

Somehow, this experience came to lay the foundation for "Tomorrow's Dawn"—a story about fear, rooted in an unchangeable past, and hope for a future that is not set in stone.

Do you find that your own fiction is often inspired by reality?

(*Bonus track:  Here's a brand new haiku, dedicated to my beloved wife and Constant Reader.)

27 comments:

  1. I can't wait to read this one, Milo. I love reading about what inspires stories, and how wonderful that you were able to bridge the cultural gap.

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  2. That's really awesome, Milo. And no, my fiction has nothing to do with my reality outside of what movies or TV shows spark my imagination.

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  3. Getting insight into what inspired stories/novels is so much fun. Thanks for sharing this early.

    And love the haiku. Sweet but subtle. :)

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  4. Very much so. I draw on my life for all my work be it character traits or incidents. I write what I know...and research the rest.

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  5. That's a great story in itself, and a nice teaser! Looking forward to reading this.

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  6. Very interesting! And yes, reality always seems to be inspiring me - sometimes it *is* stranger than fiction. Looking forward to your story and congrats! :)

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  7. Sounds great Milo. Sounds ... a whole lot better than what I came up with for my DSF story!

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  8. I love these author insights on DSF. Mine concerned 'The Littlest Pet Shop.'

    Your's is so much more meaningful, I feel a bit embarassed.

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  9. Ellie: Can't wait to share it; I'll post the link as soon as it's available.

    Alex: I often find "sparks" there too.

    Madeline: The story took its own course, but this experience was definitely inspirational for me.

    Martin: Research? Bah! =]

    A.S.: Glad you think it works on its own; I was thinking of fleshing it out and submitting it to the San Diego Reader...

    Defcon: I agree; some of the strangest characters in the world are real people!

    Simon: Have they let you know when yours is going up on the site?

    Deborah: Hey now, only I'm allowed to be self-deprecating around here! And I must ask the same question I aimed at Simon.

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  10. Nice! It's strange how some events, even seemingly insignificant ones, can have such a big impact on us...

    sometimes, I think there is some unseen force that makes us try/do things outside the norm, outside our comfort zone, just at the right time--- who are we to deny/ignore the writing gods!

    p.s. Loved the haiku!

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  11. I love the sound of this. Excellent! Off to find the haiku too :O)

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  12. Haiku is fab. I love the twist in the sentiments. Very thought provoking.:O)

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  13. E.A.S.: And yet ignorance is often bliss; sometimes it's so much easier just to remain self-contained -- and miss opportunities.

    Madeleine: Thanks for reading, Haiku Master!

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  14. Really cool background to your story, and it makes me want to read this one even more. Sometimes reality invades and inspires. I like when this happens, but it isn't often.

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  15. Can't wait to read this one Milo! Love hearing how a story or book came about.

    As for me, reality threads heavily throughout whatever I write. I love exploring the emotional baggage that comes with choices - good or bad. (Hugs)Indigo

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  16. Tony: Considering the horrors you write about, this could be a very good thing indeed. =]

    Indigo: Baggage? We don't need no stinkin' baggage! I know what you mean.

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  17. Great story, Milo.

    I'm not sure how much of my own work is inspired by reality - probably more than I'm aware of. My villain and I share an obsession with hand sanitizer. Coincidence? Probably not!

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  18. Very true... and I'm often guilty of being too self-contained. So, I'm usually surprised when something comes along that I make a point to participate in and it pans out.

    I don't like to think about the opportunities I've missed, it's too paralyzing. I'm more likely to stop altogether if I think about them too much :-(

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  19. Hey, Milo,

    Excellent.... The story definitely pulled me in. I enjoy reading about the thought process and inspiration author's use to create their stories.

    I absolutely draw from my experiences in my writing.

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  20. Jennifer: Hand sanitizer, yes. But before or after the bludgeoning?

    E.A.S.: You're right; like it's pointless for me to wish I'd started submitting my work for publication earlier. This is now, and it's all we've got.

    Michael: And the more experiences, the better!

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  21. Looks like a good one, Milo. (Well, yeah, of course!) That's a great story, and I really love the haiku. Amazing what a few words can communicate, in both cases...

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  22. Mysteria: Thanks.

    Katey: Playing with haiku-writing is helping to tame the Wordy Monster -- something I struggle with. Limiting myself to 300-word blog posts each week is another good exercise.

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  23. Sounds like a great read! Funny how art does imitate life. Most of my fantasy stories do have an element taken from my real life in there. :)
    nutschell
    www.thewritingnut.com

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  24. I just have to be careful that my life never imitates my art...

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  25. Anonymous9/22/2011

    In an insular world, insularity breeds contempt...and other things.

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  26. Unfortunately, I've seen your point.

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